Friday, November 15, 2019

Blog Stage Six: Comment on a Colleague's work

I really enjoy reading "The Dreamers" Blog by Victor Venegas, because the blog provides many pieces of information that I don't know. I always think the Trump campaign has many bad ones but I never know about he wants to end DATA. I love it when the blogger starts with the trump popular campaign promises, the wall, that bring a lot of crisis, she also mentions that some people support it. It stables her blog and helps the blog go smoothly into Venegas's main point. I  also think Venenga's very detail when she explains what is DATA that help any reader, especially me, who doesn't know about the program understand more why she makes it argue for. I agree with her argument about why we should not end DATA because it not only effects the DACA recipients but also the new DACA recipients that need the program the most, she also uses her personal story and experience as a DACA recipient make the argument even stronger. Venegas Blog is very well writing, and I think that it will make any person, who reads the blog, doesn't understand much about the topic agree with her statement.

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Blog Stage 8: Comment on a colleague's work

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